You can read the full story here https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10099018/1/The-Rise-of-the-Badger
Tuesday 4 March 2014
The Rise of the Badger - Harry Potter Fan Fiction
The user dobby82 on the site Fanfiction.net has written their own version of the start of the Harry Potter series books. Below are three extracts from this story. Please read the start of this story and use the comments below to review what you have read. What do you think?
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Leon S and Ben K - Awesome story! I know you've put a lot of work in the story but make it a bit longer. Otherwise extremely awesome!!
ReplyDeleteSelene.w = great story but can the full version be posted, the story left me wanting more!!
ReplyDeleteSelina Y-I don't have much to say but, I like your Harry Potter story, but maybe you should put more surprise and hook at the start! But I still like the story!!!
ReplyDeleteTommy S I really liked the story. It had lots of interesting parts to the story like the part at the end where they glowed.
ReplyDeleteGreat reflection Tommy. Can you tell us another part of the story you really liked?
DeleteMIA R
ReplyDeleteAn amazing story! I could read that any time! I loved all the detail!
Charlie BG and Edwin L-it was a very discriptive and intresting story. Charlie thought that the book was very cool like a ice-cream on a hot summer day. :)
ReplyDeleteFabulous simile boys. Can you elaborate as to why it was very cool Charlie?
DeleteRici C I think harry is going to grow up toagreat wizard :-)
ReplyDeleteAlex I and Lily M , we liked all the charterers but harmoine and her parents might need a little change it was a really good story we loved it
ReplyDeletelili d&tara we loved the story even though we don't read harry potter all the time I hope to read more of this in the future and you should send this to JK rolling
ReplyDeleteKatie R, Penelope S - we like how Harry and Hermione live next to each other, how Petunia's nice and it's very different to the book, how you can read the letter and the glow red (Harry),blue (Hermione) and yellow in the end.
ReplyDeleteWe like the story
You have made some wonderful comments on this post Room 28. Remember the key points we wanted you to reflect on.
ReplyDeleteWhat did you think of the:
- characters
- hook
- ending
- language
- characters etc;
You can include these by stating your opinion then supporting it with a reason. Using the word 'because' will help you with this.
Thank you for all your hard work!!
Ms Brown
Archie N a cool story, I like how the writer showed the readers the letter, unlike the first book in the series. Also they believe in letting Harry go to Hogwarts. Their are also more characters, like Hermione's parents, which were mentioned in the book but not named. Overall a good book, I would rate it a 7.5/10.#:)
ReplyDeleteWell done Archie - a very descriptive and detailed review!
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